Monday, December 19, 2016

AIS 1 tentative planner for January



Monday
Tuesday
Wednesday
Thursday
Friday
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NO SCHOOL
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Narrative Nonfiction:  “The Flaming Sky”
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5
Complete video and questions

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Read the article and complete the Close Reading sheet
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Continue with the lesson from Monday and transition into the reading questions for "Would You Ride on That?"


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Begin argument writing:  Would you want to travel on a modern zeppelin?

Re-read second article

Craft claim statement

Select 2 pieces of evidence that supports the claim

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NO SCHOOL
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Construct the counterclaim

Construct the rebuttal

Complete and review argument planner

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Review how to include the counterclaim and claim in the introduction

Start the essay in class
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LAST DAY

Complete essay

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Friday, December 16, 2016

Organizer for the Pet Cloning argument paper

Introduction:

What is the context?  Why is the subject controversial?

State the counterclaim and then the claim

Paragraph 1:

Discuss the counterclaim.  Why is it valid?  Why, though, is it not enough to go to that side of the argument?

Be sure to use text evidence (a quote) and use the process of context / quote /  connection to claim.

Paragraph 2:

Now, discuss the point you ranked first on your plan sheet.

Be sure to use text evidence (a quote) and use the process of context / quote /  connection to claim.

Paragraph 3:

Next, discuss the point you ranked second on your plan sheet.

Be sure to use text evidence (a quote) and use the process of context / quote /  connection to claim.

Conclusion:

Tell the reader why YOUR TWO POINTS outweigh the counterclaim.


When you proofread, check your word choice-- is it clear and factual when you are using examples from the text?  Is it full of emotion (connotation) when you are trying to convince the reader that your side is the correct side?


Thursday, December 15, 2016

January plan for AIS 2 (UNLESS WE HAVE A SNOW DAY...)



Monday
Tuesday
Wednesday
Thursday
Friday
2
NO SCHOOL
3
4
Review Task 3 and rubric from December

Begin reading and annotating for new Task 3:  identify the central idea and one literary element

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6
Review passage, central idea, and literary element

Identify at least three pieces of evidence from the text


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CHART:  How does each piece of evidence support the claim?

Begin draft of essay

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Continue with essay draft


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NO SCHOOL
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Review sentence frames

Edit piece


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Review State exemplars

Revise using sentence starters and context/quote/
commentary
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TBA

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TBA
 
REGENTS WEEK

Tuesday, December 6, 2016

Argument: Pet cloning

What do you think…?

Is pet cloning OK?  Go back to the article to find arguments that support EACH side of this debate.  Write the information on the lines below.

YES

NO























Now, examine points on both sides of the debate—AS WELL AS YOUR OWN BELIEFS—and decide what you think.  State your opinion in one to two sentences below, and don’t forget the “because” clause.  This statement will be the claim statement for your argument essay.





Connecting Evidence to a Claim:  Argument Planner

Claim:


Source:  (title, author, publication, page numbers, etc.)


Evidence from the article:  facts, statistics, quotes, etc.
CONNECTION:  how does this evidence connect to your purpose and claim?  How can you help the readers see the importance of this fact to the context or situation?  HOW and WHY does this evidence support your claim?  GIVE EXAMPLES.

The text says…
Here’s how it applies to my claim:









The text says…
Here’s how it applies to my claim:








The text says…
Here’s how it applies to my claim:








Sunday, November 20, 2016

AIS 1: Clinton paragraph

Here is what we've determined so far:

S:  Hillary Clinton

O:  Concession speech at the New Yorker Hotel (NYC) on November 9, 2016

A:  toward her subject--  sad; hopeful the country will come together

      toward her audience-- thankful

P:  to thank her supporters AND to convince the country to come together

S:  repetition (thankful); pathos/ emotional appeal (bring people together)


Prompt:
How successful was Hillary Clinton in delivering her message?  Choose ONE message and use clear and appropriate evidence to support your claim.


Don't forget that you should use the prompt to help develop your claim... it will keep your writing focused.



Monday, November 14, 2016

AIS 1 through DECEMBER

Monday
Tuesday
Wednesday
Thursday
Friday
5
6
Reading day:  outside reading books

Recommend your book?

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8
Should you clone your pet?

Read Scope article and complete the evidence chart

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12
Review the evidence chart and logos, ethos, and pathos.

Which side works best with a logical argument?

Which side works better with an emotional argument?

Craft a claim-- make sure there is a "because" clause; peer review if time

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Revise claim (if necessary) and connect top 3 pieces of evidence to the claim
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Review format for an argument essay:  claim and counterclaim

Begin a line of reasoning for your claim- have it checked

Make sure your evidence supports your claim

Google docs:  begin your essay

Student/teacher conferencing through Google docs
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Complete debate unit paper


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Reading day
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AIS 2 through December

Monday
Tuesday
Wednesday
Thursday
Friday
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Regents exam, Part 3 (Jan '15)
Test-Analysis Response
1.     Read and annotate directions
2.     Read passage for information and understanding

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3.     Skim passage
4.     Identify a CENTRAL IDEA
5.     Identify ONE WRITING STRATEGY used to develop the central idea
6.     ANNOTATE THE TEXT FOR 5 and 4 (collect evidence)

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7.     REVIEW steps 1-6 (Still at step 5:  Sarah and Juan)
8.     ORGANIZE ideas (try a flow chart)
9.     Begin drafting writing piece (Logan, Spencer, Mikayla, Ally)

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Continue with Monday's lesson



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10.  Review rubric and proofread piece for those elements

(Mod 4 and 10 for Monday:)

11.  Compare draft to exemplar papers

12.  What does your paper do well?  

13.  Note TWO things that you can do to improve your next Part 3 text
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13 (sub)
14.  Review rubric and "grade" sample papers

14.  Discuss process


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Discuss the "grading process"

Apply what you learned to YOUR initial draft-- what can you do to move aspects further up on the rubric?


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Catch up day:  get up to date in AIS and English class

(Finished analysis of the task 3; worked on paper for KM's class)

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Winter Concert

Reading day(?)

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Reading day

Thursday, November 10, 2016

AIS 1 through Thanksgiving



Monday
Tuesday
Wednesday
Thursday
Friday
14
15 (1/2 day schedule)

Introduce SOAPS chart and discuss common strategies used for speech analysis; read speech context and determine speaker and occasion

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17 (1/2 day schedule)

Read Hillary Clinton’s concession speech and determine her attitude toward her audience and her subject and Clinton's purpose


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Finish the SOAPS process with Clinton’s speech

Construct paragraph on Google docs


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Thanksgiving Break:   
have a wonderful break—you deserve it!